The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the number of
visitors
to four international museums between 1980 and 2015.
The Louvre Museum
started with 8 million
visitors
in 1980. It generally had an upward trend
, increasing by 1 million
visitors
in 1995, before it peaked at 9.5 million
in 2015. Meanwhile, the Shenzhen Museum
had a relatively stable trend
. It began at 4 million
visitors
in 1980 and still had the same number in 2015 while
having a small downfall between 1980 and 1995.
The London Science Museum
had a downfall trend
. It initiated
with having an average of 4 Verb problem
began
million
visitors
in 1980 and 1985, but then
began decreasing over the years. It had lost over 2 million
visitors
by the year 2015. Futhermore
, Vatican museums had a significant upward Correct your spelling
Furthermore
trend
. Only since 1980 did it have its visitors
increase rapidly. It had 4.5 million
visitors
in 1980, and it had
doubled in 2015 with 8.5 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
visitors
.
In conclusion, the Louvre and Vatican Museum
had
been having an increase in Wrong verb form
have
visitors
over the years, whereas
Shenzhen and London Science Museum
had
been losing their Wrong verb form
have
visitors
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