The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the changes in the number of
visitors
to four different international museums
between 1980 and 2015.
Between the years 1980 and 2015, an inclining trend can be seen for the Louvre and Vatican Museums
. By the end of 2015, both museums
had around 9 million
visitors
. However
, Louvre
Correct article usage
the Louvre
museum
had gone through a stable increase as they had 8 Capitalize word
Museum
million
visitors
in 1980. On the other hand
, the Vatican Museums
had a sharp increase from approximately 5 million
visitors
in 1980.
Varying from the trend, London
Science Museum went through a decrease in Correct article usage
the London
visitors
. In 1980, it was the third most visited
Add a hyphen
most-visited
museums
with 4 Fix the agreement mistake
museum
million
visitors
. Whilst in
2015, it ranked Change preposition
In
last
with approximately 2 million
visitors
.
Shenzhen Museum had gone through an instable
phase between 1980 and 2015. Correct your spelling
unstable
However
, it had the same number of visitors
during
1980 and 2015 Change preposition
between
of
around 3 Change preposition
apply
million
visitors
.
Therefore
, the change in the number of visitors
between 1980 and 2015 are
significant.Change the verb form
is
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