The map below shows a civic centre between the present and its plan. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The provided map illustrates several different new changes in an urban

area

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from today until

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future

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the future

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. It can be clearly seen that the whole region is going to experience a considerable amount of construction and urbanization

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apply

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downtown over the period.

Firstly

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,there are two car parks in

northeast

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the northeast

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and northwest of the

area

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in the present.

However

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apply

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the

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some years later they will have changed to

hotel

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hotels

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and restaurant and

cafe

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cafes

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in the central

area

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of the city.

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,the cinema will remain unchanged in the north of the urban centre from today until

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future

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the future

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.By

the some

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few decades later,the exhibition will have been demolished and replaced by council offices in the southwest of the region. It is interesting to note that,an underground library will be erected between council offices and

town

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hall

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in the south of the civic

area

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in the

future

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In addition

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,the residence of the

town

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hall

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will be moved to in front of the cinema and It will be replaced by an underground car park.Another striking change will be the transformation of the library into

the

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exhibition

int

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the southeast of the city centre next to the

town

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hall

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in the forward years.

Surprasingly

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Surprisingly

,the shopping centre in the east will be levelled off beside the

town

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hall

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apply

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some years later.

Additionally

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,High

street

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Street

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and Smith

street

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Street

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will witness no change in the west and east of the civic

area

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in the

future

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,respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, future, town, hall with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

231 words

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Civic centre
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