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The map below shows a civic centre between the present and its plan. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The map below shows a civic centre between the present and its plan. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The provided map illustrates several different new changes in an urban
area
 from today until
future
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. It can be clearly seen that the whole region is going to experience a considerable amount of construction and urbanization
in
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a
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downtown over the period.
Firstly
,there are two car parks in
northeast
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the northeast
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 and northwest of the
area
 in the present.
However
,
by
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the
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some years later they will have changed to
hotel
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hotels
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 and restaurant and
cafe
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cafes
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 in the central
area
 of the city.
Moreover
,the cinema will remain unchanged in the north of the urban centre from today until
future
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.By
the some
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a
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 few decades later,the exhibition will have been demolished and replaced by council offices in the southwest of the region. It is interesting to note that,an underground library will be erected between council offices and
town
hall
 in the south of the civic
area
 in the
future
.
In addition
,the residence of the
town
hall
 will be moved to in front of the cinema and It will be replaced by an underground car park.Another striking change will be the transformation of the library into
the
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 exhibition
int
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 the southeast of the city centre next to the
town
hall
 in the forward years.
Surprasingly
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Surprisingly
,the shopping centre in the east will be levelled off beside the
town
hall
in
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some years later.
Additionally
,High
street
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Street
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 and Smith
street
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Street
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 will witness no change in the west and east of the civic
area
 in the
future
,respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, future, town, hall with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Civic centre
  • Present
  • Plan
  • Comparison
  • Main features
  • Map
  • Summarize
  • Information
  • Report
  • Relevant
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