The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart presents a data comparison between closed and new stores in some
country
. In general, the numerous of place Fix the agreement mistake
countries
markets
that end their business is higher than the Use synonyms
number
of new business Use synonyms
markets
, except in the year of 2011 and during period 2014 until the end of 2015.
13 years ago, there were many entrepreneurs had started to open their business in the country. It is represented from the graph which showed 8.500 new shops had opened in 2011. Use synonyms
However
, the attractiveness of market shares did not Linking Words
last
long and dropped dramatically to 4.000 openings in the following year. During the year of 2012 until 2014, the Linking Words
number
of new Use synonyms
markets
had been slightly rising to 6.000 openings and declined again in 2015 to the same Use synonyms
number
of new Use synonyms
markets
in 2012. The amount of new shops had been Use synonyms
experiencing
stagnant until 2017 and dropped to its lowest point accounting for 3.000 shops in 2018.
In 2011, the Verb problem
apply
number
of closed unit businesses was not as many as the new ones, represented for 6.500 closed stores in 2011. It was marginally decreased in 2012 for account 500 stores and had been inclining to 7.000 closures. It dropped insignificantly in 2014 but Use synonyms
than
continued to decrease to the lowest point represented Replace the word
then
for
only below 1000 closures in 2015. Change preposition
by
However
, it Linking Words
was
strikingly Unnecessary verb
apply
jump
again to more than 5000 closures in 2016 and had been experiencing Wrong verb form
jumped
level
off to 2018.Correct article usage
a level
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words markets, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "represented" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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