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Nowadays, education overseas has become more accessible and growing numbers of people send their offspring to study in other countries. However, this trend has its detractors. Do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

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Studying internationally has increasingly become more popular in recent times. Some argue
this
 has certain benefits,
while
other
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others
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 disagree. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the statement and give my opinion on it Studying abroad has become more
accesible
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accessible
 to increasing numbers of
students
.
This
 phenomenon could lead to higher quality education, exposure to new languages and the ability to learn new languages. Studies
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 clearly
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 that
students
 who lived abroad during a brief period of their tertiary education, achieve much
higer
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higher
 marks than their peers. Since they have extra hurdles to deal with, in the form of new languages,
this
 creates a stimulus to improve
one-self
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. Since the
students
 are learning and communicating in daily life in a foreign language,
this
 should lead to improved language skills. These skills can
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 be applied in later careers,
thus
 leading to higher renumeration potential.
Hence
this
 is a benefit to the individual himself as to society
However
, even
while
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studying
staying
 abroad has many benefits, we should watch out for the downside risks. There is a chance of people being carried away in and strange country, leading to excessive partying and drinking. It is a known fact a lot of
students
 participating in the Erasmus exchange programme fail the majority of their classes,
thus
 leading to educational delays in getting their degrees.
To conclude
 I agree that both sides have valid arguments, an international educational
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programme
 can have many benefits,
such
 as new language acquisition, contact with new cultures and self-improvement, we should watch out for possible side
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.
Overall
, I agree that the
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positives
 outweigh the negatives.
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task achievement
You have identified and discussed multiple aspects of studying abroad, demonstrating a strong awareness of the topic.
task achievement
Main points are generally well-supported with explanations, making your arguments clear and comprehensible.
coherence cohesion
Your essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, summarizing your opinions effectively.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • scholarships
  • financial aid
  • diverse range
  • exposure
  • globalization
  • facilitated
  • application processes
  • broadening the horizon
  • brain drain
  • negatively impacting
  • cultural shock
  • isolation
  • outweigh
  • mental health
  • adjustment issues
  • reliance
  • undermine
  • domestic educational institutions
  • cultural identity
  • heritage
  • invaluable
  • fostering
  • global citizens
  • diverse cultures
  • perspectives
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