The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph offers a meticulous analysis of the change in the prices of three metals -
Copper
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,
Nickel
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, and
zinc
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- spanning the entire year of 2014. Characterized by distinct volatility patterns, the graph serves as an arresting visual narrative of the commodities market.
Overall
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,
Copper
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and
Zinc
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largely maintain steady price trajectories,
while
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Nickel
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's pricing takes a more volatile path. June marks a unique point, where a uniform decline is discernible across all three metals. To commence,
Copper
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, the epitome of stability, manifests fluctuations confined to a narrow spectrum. By stark contrast,
Nickel
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undergoes a serpentine course, characterized by significant peaks and troughs. Meanwhile,
Zinc
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adopts a more temperate profile, eschewing the extremes displayed by its metallic counterparts. June emerges as a pivotal month for all three metals, marked by a synchronous depreciation in their respective values. The ensuing month of July witnesses a noteworthy ascent in
Nickel
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and
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Copper's
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prices, a feat unmirrored by
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.
Summary
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In summary
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, from July through September, both
Copper
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and
zinc
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plateau, embarking on a period of static valuation.
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quiescence is disrupted in October by a modest contraction in their price lines.
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, November heralds a resurgence, as
Copper
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and
Zinc
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culminate in an upward trend, thereby concluding the annual saga on an upbeat note.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel, zinc with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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