The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given diagram illustrates the procedures for the way to recycle
plastic
bottles
, which contains nine steps and each of them is important.
At the very first,
people should throw the plastic
bottles
into recyclabe
trash bins, there is always a recyclable mark printed on the bin. Correct your spelling
recyclable
Then
, a large trash car would deliver all the trash to a recycling center
. In the Change the spelling
centre
center
, people are hired to sort the Change the spelling
centre
bottles
manually, all the bottles
would be
delivered to workers by Wrong verb form
are
converyor
belts, and the workers drop all the recyclable Correct your spelling
conveyor
bottles
in a bin with a "correct mark".
In the next procedure, all the recyclable bottles
will be compressed into huge blocks, then
the blocks are sent to a big machine with two gearwheels to be crushed, the crushed plastic
is then
droped
into a water pool to be washed. Correct your spelling
dropped
What'more
, the washed Correct your spelling
What's more
plastic
will be sent to a large rectangluar
machine to produce Correct your spelling
rectangular
plastic
pellets. After that the pellets will be heated to form raw material, then
the raw material is packed into bags.
Correct word choice
and then
Last
but not least, the packed raw material can be made into end products for people to use, like new bottles
, clothes, bags, pencils and other things again.Submitted by RaymondHuang
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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