The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The given diagram illustrates the procedures for the way to recycle

plastic

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bottles

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, which contains nine steps and each of them is important. At the very

first,

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people should throw the

plastic

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bottles

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into

recyclabe

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recyclable

trash bins, there is always a recyclable mark printed on the bin.

Then

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, a large trash car would deliver all the trash to a recycling

center

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centre

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. In the

center

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centre

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, people are hired to sort the

bottles

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manually, all the

bottles

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would be

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are

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delivered to workers by

converyor

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conveyor

belts, and the workers drop all the recyclable

bottles

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in a bin with a "correct mark". In the next procedure, all the recyclable

bottles

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will be compressed into huge blocks,

then

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the blocks are sent to a big machine with two gearwheels to be crushed, the crushed

plastic

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then

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droped

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dropped

into a water pool to be washed.

What'more

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What's more

, the washed

plastic

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will be sent to a large

rectangluar

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rectangular

machine to produce

plastic

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pellets. After that the pellets will be heated to form raw material,

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then

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and then

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the raw material is packed into bags.

Last

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but not least, the packed raw material can be made into end products for people to use, like new

bottles

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, clothes, bags, pencils and other things again.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

203 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Recycling process
Disposal
Collection
Sorting
Cleaning
Contaminants
Recycling center
Plastic flakes
Melting
Re-shaping
Raw materials
Transformation
Repurposing
End products
Variety
Sustainability

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The digital age has made the gap between the younger and older generations wider. Give reasons for your own answer.

Space travel has been possibile for some time, and some people believe that space tourism could be developed in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Some people believe that a person’s criminal record should be removed when they reach the age of 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many young people choose to take a year out between finishing school and starting university in order to gain work experience or to travel. The experience of non-academic life this offers benefits the individual when they return to education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?