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The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitor to a museum between 1997 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitor to a museum between 1997 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart gives information about the figures of 3 types of
guets
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guests
which are
adult
visitors
,
visitors
 aged under 15 and special exhibition
visitors
 to a museum from 1997 to 2012.
Overall
,
the
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adult
visitors
 had the highest visit rate
whereas
,
visitors
 who
is
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are
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 under the age of 15
were fewer
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 ratio. At first glance,
adult
visitors
 were the best lover to visit a museum compared to other
guets
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guests
 because they had 300,100 visitor person in
the
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1997 and their numbers of
visitors
 significantly increased from 2002 with 302
thousund
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thousand
visitor
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visitors
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 to 2007 between 2012 respectively 400
thousund
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thousand
 and 380.000
person
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people
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. As
apposed
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opposed
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 to the special exhibition
were
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being
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 the fewest
visiter
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visitors
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in terms of
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the numbers
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numbers
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number
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 of
visitors
 , they had 28.000
guets
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guests
 in 1997 after that the group started of smidgen
incremet
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increase
 in the years 2007 and 2012.
Visitors
 who are under the age of 15 gradually went down from 1997 with 120
thosund
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thousand
 to 2012 82.300 person. Ultimately we can say that ; the museum had plenty of
adult
visitors
 in 4
years
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4-year
 period,
on the other
hand
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sepcial
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special
exhbition
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exhibition
visitors
 did not
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prefer
prefered
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prefered to
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 visit the venue.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words adult, visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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