The diagram below shows the procedure for making a cup of coffee. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
report derives from the listed process of making coffee
. A glance at the chart reveals that the procedure embraces 11 pivotal stages, commencing from the gathering of coffee
beans
to distributing coffee
into jars for selling purposes.
To begin
with, the 1 stage involved human labour to pick up the beans
from trees followed by the evaporating process of the beans
under boiling weather. In the subsequent step
, the beans
are needed to be smashed whereas
the 4th stage showcases a swift freezing process of beans
. Regarding the 5th stage when coffee
beans
are put into a coffee
grinder, then
mix them with hot water and strained
Wrong verb form
strain
Correct pronoun usage
them
thereafter
in the 6th and 7th stages, respectively. Similarly
, the 8th step
requires freezing the mixture again like in the 4th step
. Furthermore
, the resulting liquid mixture is needed to be ground again,
and Remove the comma
apply
then
evaporates
in a vacuum in the 9th and 10th stages. Wrong verb form
evaporated
Last
but not least step
covers packings
the dried Correct your spelling
packing
beans
into the jars for further
distribution in stores.Submitted by kirkagoglesmail on
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