The graph shows the life expectancy of people living in Asian regions from 1950 and predicts life expectancy until 2300. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the life expectancy of people living in Asian regions from 1950 and predicts life expectancy until 2300.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph compares six regions of Asia in terms of
people
life
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lifetime
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time
from 1950 to
present
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the present
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days
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day
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,
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and
also
provides a prediction of it until 2300.Units
measures
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measure
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in age.
Overall
, it is
abvious
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obvious
that the life expectancy of the
people
of these six areas has grown throughout the
time line
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timeline
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, from the past to the present
days
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day
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and there is
a
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an
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expectation of how it
would
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will
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be until the end of the given period. At the beginning of
time
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the time
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line, the
avrage
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average
dead
time
of
people
in Western Asia stood more than the
another places
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another place
other places
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at about 53 and has been reached
about80
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about 80
to 85 for the
time
being (year 2000 to 2050).
However
, the
indian
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Indian
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people
had lived about 45 in 1950, and
also
this
was less than 40 for
people
in 4 other places, which
this
age has risen to more or less 70 for all of them. There is a simple
predicted
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prediction
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, which all of the
linse
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lines
indicating these 6 sections of Asia are expected to continue to extend their figure of age by a steady
increas
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increase
to will be reach
at
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apply
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a range of about 95 to just more than 100.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, time with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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