The graph shows the life expectancy of people living in Asian regions from 1950 and predicts life expectancy until 2300. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph compares six regions of
Asia
in terms of people's lifetime from 1950 to the present day and also
provides a prediction of it until 2300. Unit measures in age.
Overall
, it is obvious that the life expectancy of the people of these six areas has grown throughout the timeline, from the past to the present day and there is an expectation of how it will be until the end of the given period.
Regarding the beginning of the timeline, the average dead time of humans in Other Eastern Asia
stood more than the other places at about 53 and has reached about 80 to 85 for the time being (year
2000 to 2050). Change the article
the year
However
, the Indian nation had lived about 45 in 1950, and also
this
was less than 40 for mankind in 4 other places, which this
age has risen to more or less 70 for all of them.
Morever
, Correct your spelling
Moreover
for
Change preposition
in
future
there is a simple prediction, Correct article usage
the future
which
all of the lines indicating these 6 sections of Correct word choice
that
Asia
are expected to continue to extend their figure of age by a steady increase to reach a range of about 95 for Other South-center Asia
to just more than 100 for Other Eastern Asia
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