The graph shows the life expectancy of people living in Asian regions from 1950 and predicts life expectancy until 2300. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the life expectancy of people living in Asian regions from 1950 and predicts life expectancy until 2300. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph compares six regions of
Asia
in terms of people's lifetime from 1950 to the present day and
also
provides a prediction of it until 2300. Unit measures in age.
Overall
, it is obvious that the life expectancy of the people of these six areas has grown throughout the timeline, from the past to the present day and there is an expectation of how it will be until the end of the given period. Regarding the beginning of the timeline, the average dead time of humans in Other Eastern
Asia
stood more than the other places at about 53 and has reached about 80 to 85 for the time being (
year
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2000 to 2050).
However
, the Indian nation had lived about 45 in 1950, and
also
this
was less than 40 for mankind in 4 other places, which
this
age has risen to more or less 70 for all of them.
Morever
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Moreover
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for
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future
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the future
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there is a simple prediction,
which
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that
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all of the lines indicating these 6 sections of
Asia
are expected to continue to extend their figure of age by a steady increase to reach a range of about 95 for Other South-center
Asia
to just more than 100 for Other Eastern
Asia
.
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