The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.
The table shows the number of
children
ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.
Overall
, it can be pointed out from the table that, two children
were the maximum in 2006 while
none was the minimal in 1981.
According to the line graph , four or more children
started at 27.6% in 1981 and jumped down 11% in 2006. But one child was increased over the given period. In comparison, three children
went down from 27.4% to 21.5% between 1981 to 2006.
Two children
started from 29.0 went
up to 38.2 between 1981-1996 women aged 40-44 years Correct word choice
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% increase.
Correct article usage
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In addition
, it is clear from the table that, the most decreasing point was four children
and more children
. However
, the huge increase was one child. Even though it had a big difference still was lower than other categories.Submitted by i.nureddinn on
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