The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.

The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.
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The table shows the number of
children
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ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.
Overall
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, it can be pointed out from the table that, two
children
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were the maximum in 2006
while
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none was the minimal in 1981. According to the line graph , four or more
children
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started at 27.6% in 1981 and jumped down 11% in 2006. But one child was increased over the given period. In comparison, three
children
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went down from 27.4% to 21.5% between 1981 to 2006. Two
children
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started from 29.0
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up to 38.2 between 1981-1996 women aged 40-44 years
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this
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it
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had only
1
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a 1
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% increase.
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, it is clear from the table that, the most decreasing point was four
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and more
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.
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, the huge increase was one child. Even though it had a big difference still was lower than other categories.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 88%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words children with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fertility rate
  • demographic shift
  • age cohort
  • workforce implications
  • government policy
  • birth rate fluctuations
  • education level
  • career advancement
  • reproductive health
  • family planning
  • socio-economic factors
  • population pyramid
  • life expectancy
  • childbearing age
  • maternity leave
  • contraceptive methods
  • population growth rate
  • average family size
  • maternal health
  • census data
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