The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pictures illustrate the routes to a city hospital in the years 2007 and 2010. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that more facilities have been built for hospital staff and public citizens.
Also
, many layouts related to the public transportation system have changed. In 2007, There was not any roundabout on the roads which had access to the city hospital.
However
, in 2010, two roundabouts were created, one in the southern part of the hospital and another one at the junction of Hospital Rd and City Road. In the past layout, both the staff and public car parking area were in the same place, in the east of Hospital Rd. In 2010, the old parking area remained unaltered, but only for staff, and a new
parkingwas
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parking was
created for the public, close to the hospital. Another significant change in the 2010 layout is the
bus
station. In 2007, a couple of
bus
stops were on each side of Hospital Rd. In 2010, these
bus
stops were removed and
instead
, a
bus
station was established in the southwest part of the hospital which had access to both created roundabouts.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bus with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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