The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of Jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in Jeans at the end of next year.

The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of Jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in Jeans at the end of next year.
We have
two
charts, the bar
chart
depicts
two
companies estimated sales in Turkey of Jeans for next year.
while
the pie
chart
shows the
two
companies projected market share of Jeans
at the end
of next year. It is clear from the graph that sales fluctuate.
According to
what is shown on the bar
chart
, I see that Jack and Jones
Co
. have the largest proportion than Mango
Co
. Both peaks in December.
While
they have the lowest in February.
While
in July and August, Mango
Co
. jumps and overcomes Jack and Jones
Co
. Moving on, on the pie
chart
which shows the
two
companies projected market share of Jeans
at the end
of next year comparing it to the bar
chart
it appears that Mango
Co
. has the largest proportion at about 50 per cent. Comes directly after it is Jack and Jones
Co
. with 30 per cent . Others are the lowest with 20 per cent.
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  • estimated sales
  • projected market share
  • dominant player
  • competition
  • consumer choice
  • pricing strategies
  • market trends
  • marketing campaigns
  • economic conditions
  • fashion trends
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