The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The diagram depicts the information about honey production by bees, and there are seven important stages that will be described in
this
essay.
Firstly
, bees are living in a group to build a new bee hive.
Next,
they fly and try to find some flowers with strong scent.
Then
, they will land on flowers to suck their nectar as their food. After that, they will work together to bring the nectar to their hive and fill each cell with it. After that, they stay in the cells and move their wings to produce air.
Furthermore
, the warmth of the sun produces water in the cells to let the evaporation process happen. After all these steps, the honey is produced in the bee's hive, which will be ready to be harvested and stored in a glass jar with a solid lid.
To conclude
, honey production by bees is a simple and natural process, which is done naturally at a certain length of time.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Metamorphosis
  • Nectar
  • Foraging
  • Pollination
  • Worker bees
  • House bees
  • Honey stomach
  • Honeycomb cells
  • Beeswax
  • Evaporation
  • Hexagon-shaped
  • Simple sugars
  • Enzymes
  • Capping
  • Preserve
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