The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Honey
is a product of bee activity that can be exploited for human consumption.The diagram illustrates the Use synonyms
process
of Use synonyms
honey
production by Use synonyms
bees
. The Use synonyms
process
consists of seven steps, starting from building the Use synonyms
hive
to the final product of Use synonyms
honey
. The following is an explanation of the Use synonyms
process
.
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Firstly
, Linking Words
bees
create a Use synonyms
hive
where the Use synonyms
honey
will be processed. Use synonyms
Next,
the Linking Words
bees
collect nectar from flowers and Use synonyms
then
transport them back to the Linking Words
hive
. In the Use synonyms
hive
, nectars are stored inside cells. Use synonyms
Afterwards
water evaporates from the nectar leaving behind the final product, which is Add a comma
Afterwards,
honey
. The Use synonyms
last
step is harvesting the Linking Words
honey
from the Use synonyms
hive
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then
placing it inside jars.
The Linking Words
process
of Use synonyms
honey
production is done without human intervention and wholely by nature except for the harvesting. It is a complex Use synonyms
process
which involves organisms consisting of hundreds or even thousands of Use synonyms
bees
and flowers to be done.Use synonyms
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