The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
Honey
is a product of bee activity that can be exploited for human consumption.The diagram illustrates the
process
of
honey
production by
bees
. The
process
consists of seven steps, starting from building the
hive
to the final product of
honey
. The following is an explanation of the
process
.
Firstly
,
bees
create a
hive
where the
honey
will be processed.
Next,
the
bees
collect nectar from flowers and
then
transport them back to the
hive
. In the
hive
, nectars are stored inside cells.
Afterwards
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Afterwards,
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water evaporates from the nectar leaving behind the final product, which is
honey
. The
last
step is harvesting the
honey
from the
hive
and
then
placing it inside jars. The
process
of
honey
production is done without human intervention and wholely by nature except for the harvesting. It is a complex
process
which involves organisms consisting of hundreds or even thousands of
bees
and flowers to be done.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Metamorphosis
  • Nectar
  • Foraging
  • Pollination
  • Worker bees
  • House bees
  • Honey stomach
  • Honeycomb cells
  • Beeswax
  • Evaporation
  • Hexagon-shaped
  • Simple sugars
  • Enzymes
  • Capping
  • Preserve
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