The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Honey
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is a product of bee activity that can be exploited for human consumption.The diagram illustrates the
process
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of
honey
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production by
bees
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. The
process
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consists of seven steps, starting from building the
hive
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to the final product of
honey
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. The following is an explanation of the
process
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.
Firstly
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,
bees
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create a
hive
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where the
honey
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will be processed.
Next,
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the
bees
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collect nectar from flowers and
then
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transport them back to the
hive
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. In the
hive
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, nectars are stored inside cells.
Afterwards
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Afterwards,
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water evaporates from the nectar leaving behind the final product, which is
honey
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. The
last
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step is harvesting the
honey
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from the
hive
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and
then
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placing it inside jars. The
process
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of
honey
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production is done without human intervention and wholely by nature except for the harvesting. It is a complex
process
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which involves organisms consisting of hundreds or even thousands of
bees
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and flowers to be done.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words honey, process, bees, hive with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Metamorphosis
  • Nectar
  • Foraging
  • Pollination
  • Worker bees
  • House bees
  • Honey stomach
  • Honeycomb cells
  • Beeswax
  • Evaporation
  • Hexagon-shaped
  • Simple sugars
  • Enzymes
  • Capping
  • Preserve
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