The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates the percentage of inhabitants who were living in
cities
in four Asian countries from 1970 to 2020 with forecasts for two
decades
.
Overall
, the
population
of all citizens in Indonesia, Malaysia,
Thailand
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and Thailand
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which were increased over the period,
whereas
the percentage of people living in
cities
, particularly the Philippines was ever dropped, but
then
continued back to the initial level
at the end
of
decades
. With regard to the number of people living in
cities
, especially in Malaysia, it began at 30% of the
population
in 1970 and
then
rocketed to above 70% of inhabitants in 2020, even though it is predicted to increase and reach a peak at around 80% in 2040.
Likewise
, from above 10% of the
population
in Indonesia living in
cities
in 1970, it dramatically increased over the
decades
and forecasts reaching the highest percentage at under 60% in 2040.
On the other hand
, citizens in the Philippines from around 30% of its total
population
in 1970, it was rose and hit a peak at 50% in 1990 and
then
declined to 40% in 2010, but after that, it rose over the
decades
and it predicts same percentages with the beginning of
decades
in 2040. To Thailand, from 20% at the beginning of the period, it increased over 2
decades
but
then
remained stable until 2020, but it is forecast to reach a peak at around 40% in 2040.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cities, decades, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.

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