The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004
The line graph illustrates average
carbon
dioxide
emissions
per
person
in four different countries (the United
Kingdom
, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal), which were emitted over 40 years from 1967-2007. Units are measured in metric
tonnes
.
Overall
, the
carbon
dioxide
emissions
of the United
Kingdom
and Sweden per
person
decreased over the period given,
while
for Italy and Portugal, they rose. In the timeline given, the United
Kingdom
had the highest
carbon
dioxide
emissions
per
person
. With regard to the amount of CO2
emissions
in the United
Kingdom
, it started at around 11 metric
tonnes
in 1967, after which it dropped to approximately 8
tonnes
at the end
of the period.
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,
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Sweden, its CO2
emissions
began at nearly 8.8
tonnes
and
then
peaked at 10.3
tonnes
in 1977 before falling dramatically to about 5
tonnes
in 2007.
On the other hand
, the
carbon
dioxide
emissions
per
person
in Italy started at 4.2 metric
tonnes
in the first year and it
then
rose to 7.8
tonnes
in 1997 and remained unchanged in the next ten years. Portugal
also
increased steadily from around 1.2
tonnes
to 5.6
tonnes
between 1967 to 2007.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • fish
  • meat
  • poultry
  • beef
  • lamb
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • gradual
  • significant
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • trough
  • steady
  • correlation
  • period
  • data
  • comparison
  • predominant
  • kilograms per capita
  • dietary habits
  • health consciousness
  • sustainability
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