The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004
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The line graph illustrates average
carbon
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dioxide
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emissions
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per
person
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in four different countries (the United
Kingdom
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, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal), which were emitted over 40 years from 1967-2007. Units are measured in metric
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.
Overall
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, the
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dioxide
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emissions
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of the United
Kingdom
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and Sweden per
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decreased over the period given,
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for Italy and Portugal, they rose. In the timeline given, the United
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had the highest
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dioxide
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emissions
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per
person
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. With regard to the amount of CO2
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in the United
Kingdom
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, it started at around 11 metric
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in 1967, after which it dropped to approximately 8
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at the end
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of the period.
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Sweden, its CO2
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began at nearly 8.8
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and
then
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peaked at 10.3
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in 1977 before falling dramatically to about 5
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in 2007.
On the other hand
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, the
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dioxide
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emissions
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per
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in Italy started at 4.2 metric
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in the first year and it
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rose to 7.8
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in 1997 and remained unchanged in the next ten years. Portugal
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increased steadily from around 1.2
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to 5.6
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between 1967 to 2007.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, dioxide, emissions, person, kingdom, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • fish
  • meat
  • poultry
  • beef
  • lamb
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • gradual
  • significant
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • trough
  • steady
  • correlation
  • period
  • data
  • comparison
  • predominant
  • kilograms per capita
  • dietary habits
  • health consciousness
  • sustainability
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