Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Widespread opinions that school is not required anymore since

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is accessible for the acquisition of vast

information

is in controversy. Of course, it is a fact that, using the

internet

, people can obtain much more

information

than before,

however

, the role of

schools

is

great

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more

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than only in delivering

information

. I can barely support

this

statement for the following reasons.

First,

schools

offer

organized

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learning arena

that is

so critical

especially

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to the young learners.

Such

structure has benefits to the

child

as they are able to learn discipline, understand time management and inabilities to take

responsibilities

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.

While

,

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information

is easier to obtain through books and

thus

can be managed by the

chid

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child

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without the need for immediate supervision the

internet

can easily contain

information

in its broad reach and a

child

may find it hard to sift through the available

information

. As educators, they are responsible for the selection and

the

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organization of material

as well as

the choice of media and presentation

format

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formats

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that are suitable for the classroom and the

child

/children’s developmental stage.

Secondly

,

schools

are essential structures in

the

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society as they are central to the social interactive process. They allow the children to be able to play with other children,

enhance

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their social skills, and

friendship

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friendships

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. These interactions are profound in as much as they foster empathy, teamwork and communication which are aspects that are quite difficult to be inculcated through online lessons. The key that makes a student different from being an isolated tutorial or online learner is the class project, group work, and interpersonal relations.

Also

,

schools

give formal education that involves physical education, arts, and other co-curricular activities.

Such

aspects of schooling entail the nurturing of the total

child

through

provision

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of a rich environment that

promote

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freedom of expression, healthy bodies, and

sound

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mind. Much as the

internet

may perhaps be

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as a rich resource to obtain all

information

, it does not

has

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the reserve to fully and adequately provide for

such

an educational experience as

this

. In conclusion,

although

the World Wide Web is one of the available sources of

information

,

schools

are irreplaceable when it comes to supporting education, developing children’s personalities and socializing them. The multiple responsibilities that

schools

play in the development of children cannot be taken over by the

internet

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only.