The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040.

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line graph illustrates the percentage of the population in

four

Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with

prediction

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for 2030 and 2040. The

four

countries in the graph are

Philippines

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the Philippines

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, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia.

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, all

four

states have an upward trend generally but, the portion of

Philippines

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the Philippines

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declined once, from 1990 to 2010 and the Thailand population kept

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figure from 1990 to 2020. In 2020, over 80% of people who were in Malaysia lived in cities. Considering only 30% of Malaysians lived in urban in 1970, it's a huge development and change. Focusing on the prediction for 2030 and 2040, the number of people who are living in cities in every

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will increase. The portion of Malaysia,Indonesia and Philippines will be over 50% in 2040

however

the percentage of Thai will be slightly under 50%. Even though less than 15% of Indonesians lived in urban areas in 1970, almost 60%

people

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of people

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will stay in urban places in 2040, which is the

second highest

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figure among

of

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these

four

countries.