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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040.
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This
 line graph illustrates the percentage of the population in
four
 Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with
prediction
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predictions
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 for 2030 and 2040. The
four
 countries in the graph are
Philippines
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the Philippines
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, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia.
Overall
, all
four
 states have an upward trend generally but, the portion of
Philippines
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the Philippines
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 declined once, from 1990 to 2010 and the Thailand population kept
similar
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a similar
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 figure from 1990 to 2020. In 2020, over 80% of people who were in Malaysia lived in cities. Considering only 30% of Malaysians lived in urban in 1970, it's a huge development and change. Focusing on the prediction for 2030 and 2040, the number of people who are living in cities in every
states
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state
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 will increase. The portion of Malaysia,Indonesia and Philippines will be over 50% in 2040
however
 the percentage of Thai will be slightly under 50%. Even though less than 15% of Indonesians lived in urban areas in 1970, almost 60%
people
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of people
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 will stay in urban places in 2040, which is the
second highest
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second-highest
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 figure among
of
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these
four
 countries.
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