The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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United
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the United
dollars
.
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funds
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defense
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one-third
total
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the total
dolars
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dollars
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