The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided bar graph illustrates the annual income jobs relating to language in US
dollar
in five cities .
Fix the agreement mistake
dollars
Overall
, it is clear that
there is a rising amount of salaries for interpreters is
most of the cities as Correct your spelling
in
for
translators and language teachers Change preposition
apply
they
differ Correct pronoun usage
apply
according to
the place they work in . However
, only in Mexico
we can see the same amount of pay for all three of the jobs as their salaries are about twenty-thousand dollars .
Add a comma
Mexico,
On the other hand
,only in Toronto both translators and language teachers are paid the same while
interpreters are given more . Also
, in Paris
the latter is provided the same amount as translators with the teachers being paid less with only a little over 40000 dollars .Add a comma
Paris,
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