The map below shows a civic centre between the present and its plan. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The map below shows a civic centre between the present and its plan. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The map illustrates the current layout and the proposed future plan for the city centre. The future plan maintains most of the existing facilities but relocates some and introduces new ones. In the current layout, North Avenue hosts two
car
parks on either side of the cinema. Along Victoria Avenue, there are council offices, a
town
hall
, an exhibition
hall
, a shopping
center
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, and a library. In the future plan, the cinema, shopping centre, and
town
hall
remain in their current locations.
However
, significant changes are proposed:
Firstly
, a hotel and restaurant will replace the
car
park next to Smith Street, and a café will replace the
car
park next to High Street.
Secondly
, the council offices, presently beside the
town
hall
, will move beneath the café, and a new underground library will be constructed where the council offices are currently located. And
then
, an underground
car
park will be built beneath the
town
hall
.
Besides
, the exhibition
hall
will be relocated to the space currently occupied by the library.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Civic centre
  • Present
  • Plan
  • Comparison
  • Main features
  • Map
  • Summarize
  • Information
  • Report
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