The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent
The line graph illustrates how many
visitors
Use synonyms
coming
to the Caribbean Wrong verb form
came
Island
over a Use synonyms
period
of eight years starting from 2010 to 2017. Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
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in
the outset of the Change preposition
at
period
, most of the tourists chose to stay on the Use synonyms
island
, Use synonyms
while
most of them Linking Words
prefer
to stay on Wrong verb form
preferred
cruise
ships Use synonyms
at the
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end
of the given Use synonyms
period
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the total Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
guests
, either staying on the Use synonyms
island
or on the Use synonyms
cruise
ships tended to increase throughout the Use synonyms
period
, Use synonyms
as well as
the total of both categories.
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According to
the data, in 2010, there were 750,000 Linking Words
visitors
stayed on the Use synonyms
island
, three times higher than those who prefer staying Use synonyms
in
their Change preposition
on
cruise
ship. Use synonyms
Although
the Linking Words
number
remained unchanged in the following year, it experienced an increase consistently until the next two years, reaching Use synonyms
at
1.5 Remove the preposition
apply
million
tourists. The Use synonyms
number
remained stable until the Use synonyms
end
of the Use synonyms
period
, except in 2016 when they declined slightly to around 1.25 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
guests
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, there were 250,000 Linking Words
guests
staying on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ship
in 2010. The Fix the agreement mistake
ships
number
experienced its ups and downs until 2013 before increasing consistently and surpassing the total Use synonyms
Use synonyms
visitors
who Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
enjoy
staying on the Wrong verb form
enjoyed
island
in the middle of the year 2015. Use synonyms
Finally
, it reached a peak at 2 Linking Words
million
people Use synonyms
at the
Linking Words
end
of the given Use synonyms
period
, higher than the Use synonyms
number
of those who prefer staying on the Use synonyms
island
.
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Additionally
, the total Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
guests
coming to Caribbean Use synonyms
Island
showed an upward trend. Starting at 1 Use synonyms
million
people Use synonyms
in
the beginning of the Change the preposition
at
period
, the Use synonyms
number
gradually rose until the next five years to around 2.75 Use synonyms
million
. After maintaining the same Use synonyms
number
in the following year, the total Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
significantly grew to 3.5 Use synonyms
million
people Use synonyms
at the
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end
of the Use synonyms
period
.Use synonyms
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