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The bar chart and table show information about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries in 2004 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart and table show information about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries in 2004 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The following bar chart showcases the number of
students
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 pursuing education in four English-speaking nations in the years 2004 and 2012.
Similarly
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, the table showcases the aggregate proportion of international
students
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 in those countries.
Overall
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, it can be observed that all the countries experienced a surge in the admissions of international
students
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. The USA remains the top choice for
students
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while
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 Canada at the lowest. Talking about numbers, in 2004, the USA had slightly above 150 foreign
students
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 but that figure rose to nearly 250 in 2012. The UK and Australia witnessed a similar trend, both of them had more than 100
students
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 in 2004 and almost 200 in 2012. Canada remained lowest compared to its rivals, its number remaining steady at nearly 50
students
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. In 2012, the proportion of foreign
students
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 remained highest in Australia at exactly 24%, meanwhile, the UK trailed behind at 13%.
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, Surprisingly USA had the lowest share of foreign
students
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 compared to the total
students
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 at 2% only,
although
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 it had the highest number of foreign
students
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 enrolled.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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