The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.
The line graph illustrates the
consumption
trends of three spreads, namely Use synonyms
margarine
, low-fat and reduced-fat spreads, and Use synonyms
butter
, in Use synonyms
grams
per person per week.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
consumption
of Use synonyms
margarine
witnessed a significant decline over the period presented, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
butter
Use synonyms
consumption
demonstrated a steady rise from its initial low point. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, low-fat and reduced-fat spreads enjoyed a surge in popularity, though Linking Words
this
trend began to reverse towards the end of the period.
Linking Words
Margarine
Use synonyms
consumption
began at 140 Use synonyms
grams
per person per week in 1981Use synonyms
,
and generally declined over the subsequent 26 years. After peaking at 160 Remove the comma
apply
grams
in 1986, it decreased to 100 Use synonyms
grams
in 1991 and continued to fall to 80 Use synonyms
grams
in 1996. The Use synonyms
consumption
of Use synonyms
margarine
continued to decrease to 60 Use synonyms
grams
in 2001 and fell Use synonyms
further
to 40 Linking Words
grams
in 2007.
Low-fat and reduced-fat spreads experienced a notable increase in popularity, rising from a mere 20 Use synonyms
grams
per person per week in 1981 to 60 Use synonyms
grams
in 1986 and 80 Use synonyms
grams
in 1991. Use synonyms
This
growth continued until 1996Linking Words
,
when Remove the comma
apply
consumption
peaked at 80 Use synonyms
grams
. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, the Linking Words
consumption
of reduced-fat spreads experienced a slight decline to 70 Use synonyms
grams
in 2001 and fell dramatically to 40 Use synonyms
grams
in 2007. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Linking Words
butter
Use synonyms
consumption
, which began at 140 Use synonyms
grams
in 1981, fell steadily to 100 Use synonyms
grams
in 1986 and to 50 Use synonyms
grams
in 1991. After reaching its lowest point in 1996 at 80 Use synonyms
grams
, Use synonyms
butter
Use synonyms
consumption
gradually rose to 90 Use synonyms
grams
in 2001 and Use synonyms
then
surged to 140 Linking Words
grams
in 2007.Use synonyms
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