The table below gives information about the amount of beef exported in five different countries in 2012,2014, and 2016.

The table below gives information about the amount of beef exported in five different countries in 2012,2014, and 2016.
The table chart shows the
amount
of
beef
exportation
in 5 different countries – Japan, Switzerland, Brazil, Norway, and Uruguay – in 2012, 2014, and 2016. The quantity of exported
beef
was depicted in
tonnes
. One notable observation is the huge
amount
of exported
beef
of
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Brazil, which remained consistently high throughout the period. Its quantities of
this
meat gradually rose from roughly 125,000
tonnes
in 2012 to 138,000
tonnes
in 2016. Japan experienced striking increases in the total
amount
of
beef
exportation
,
quardrupling
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quadrupling
to 1,005 compared to the first year of
this
period.
On the other hand
, Uruguay, which had the second largest quantities of
beef
exported, fluctuated around about 40,000
tonnes
over
the
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time. Meanwhile,
while
the
amount
of
beef
exportation
in Norway over doubled by 2014, its figure dipped sharply by 2016, reaching its lowest record.
Finally
, the
amount
of Switzerland stagnated since the starting year.
Overall
,
while
Japan’s
amount
of
beef
exportation
skyrocketed, Brazil was the largest country for
amount
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of
beef
exportation
and Uruguay was the second largest country in 2012, 2014, and 2016.
Also
, the other countries, Norway, and Switzerland, experienced ups and downs in the
amount
of
beef
exportation
during the period.
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