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The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of residents’ coffee and tea purchasing and consuming habits in last 4 weeks in five different cities (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart) in Australia.

The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of residents’ coffee and tea purchasing and consuming habits in last 4 weeks in five different cities (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart) in Australia.
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 outcome of a survey about people's preference in buying and drinking
coffee
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 and tea in five major Australian cities.
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it is clear that
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 residents of all cities except
Adelaide
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 preferred going to a cafe for
coffee
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 and tea in the
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 four weeks.
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 buying fresh
coffee
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 was the least popular in all five cities. Starting with
Sydney
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 and
Melbourne
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, it showed
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 trend. The percentage of citizens who went to cafes was 61% and 63% in
Sydney
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 and
Melbourne
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 respectively. Approximately 48% of people bought instant
coffee
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 in
Melbourne
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 which was slightly lower in
Sydney
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 by 3%.
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, only 42% of residents purchased fresh
coffee
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 in
Melbourne
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 which was moderately higher by 2% in
Sydney
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. As for Brisbane,
Adelaide
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, and Hobart, the former and
Adelaide
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 spend exactly the same percentage on buying fresh
coffee
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 which was 34%. In the trend of going out to cafes for drinking, Hobert is at
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 great height of 63%.
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,
Adelaide
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 was the only unique city to consume less
coffee
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 in cafes rather than instant
coffee
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, adelaide, sydney, melbourne with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • residents
  • habits
  • purchasing
  • consuming
  • illustrates
  • comparison
  • preferences
  • trend
  • frequency
  • café culture
  • observations
  • urban lifestyle
  • fresh coffee
  • instant coffee
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