The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of residents’ coffee and tea purchasing and consuming habits in last 4 weeks in five different cities (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart) in Australia.

The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of residents’ coffee and tea purchasing and consuming habits in last 4 weeks in five different cities (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart) in Australia.
The bar graph provides
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outcome of a survey about people's preference in buying and drinking
coffee
and tea in five major Australian cities.
Overall
,
it is clear that
residents of all cities except
Adelaide
preferred going to a cafe for
coffee
and tea in the
last
four weeks.
While
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buying fresh
coffee
was the least popular in all five cities. Starting with
Sydney
and
Melbourne
, it showed
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trend. The percentage of citizens who went to cafes was 61% and 63% in
Sydney
and
Melbourne
respectively. Approximately 48% of people bought instant
coffee
in
Melbourne
which was slightly lower in
Sydney
by 3%.
Moreover
, only 42% of residents purchased fresh
coffee
in
Melbourne
which was moderately higher by 2% in
Sydney
. As for Brisbane,
Adelaide
, and Hobart, the former and
Adelaide
spend exactly the same percentage on buying fresh
coffee
which was 34%. In the trend of going out to cafes for drinking, Hobert is at
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great height of 63%.
Additionally
,
Adelaide
was the only unique city to consume less
coffee
in cafes rather than instant
coffee
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, adelaide, sydney, melbourne with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • residents
  • habits
  • purchasing
  • consuming
  • illustrates
  • comparison
  • preferences
  • trend
  • frequency
  • café culture
  • observations
  • urban lifestyle
  • fresh coffee
  • instant coffee
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