The map above shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and presen

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The diagram illustrates how the

village

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of Ryemouth has changed since 1995.

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, the main changes have taken place, including the replacement of farmland, and a public park with several sports fields. In 1995, there used to be farmland in the top right-hand corner of the

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. A public park was constructed at the

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of the

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, surrounded by three roads. One road ran directly from west to east,

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another road extended vertically from the north to the south, intersecting a residential area and sporting facility, and ended up with a fish market in the south.

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, the remaining road traversed horizontally from east to west, passing by both coffee shops and hotels. In the bottom left and right corners of the

village

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was the sea, providing an area for morning fish boats. currently, the farmland has been split into two parts; one part has been converted into a tennis court, and the other part is a golf course. All the roads mentioned earlier remain unchanged,

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the public park has been replaced with holiday homes, with a portion of the land reserved for parking. The Sports facilities and fish markets have been replaced with restaurants and apartments, respectively.

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, the fishing boats have been removed from the sea, making way for yacht boats.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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3 paragraphs

216 words

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Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To whtat extent do you agree or disagree?