The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the annual
sales
of movies in various formats, including rentals, VHS, DVD and blu-ray
, in a specific shop from 2002 to 2011. Change the capitalization
Blu-ray
Overall
, it can be seen that rentals and DVD sales
had high
volume of Add an article
a high
sales
while
VHS sales
and blu-ray
Change the capitalization
Blu-ray
sales
had
not show a significant number of Verb problem
did
sales
.
There was a downward trend of rentals over time
period, Add an article
the time
a time
started
at 185,000 Wrong verb form
starting
units
by 2002 and consistently decreased
around 58,000 Wrong verb form
decreasing
units
by 2011. Meanwhile, blu-ray
format started at just under 50,000 Correct article usage
the blu-ray
units
by 2002 and reached the
peak at 215,000 Correct article usage
a
units
by 2007 before droped
to 180,000 by 2011.
VHS format showed a minimal number of Correct your spelling
dropped
sales
at around 85,000 unit
by 2002 and continually fell to 0 by 2006 and the following years. After 2007, Fix the agreement mistake
units
blu-ray
which
began to Correct pronoun usage
apply
sales had
a slight increase Wrong verb form
have
of
Change preposition
in
sales
at around 2,000 units
and increased minimally to just over 10,000 units
by 2011.Submitted by pasineekhanpakdee on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, blu-ray, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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