下面的平面图展示了 1920 年首次开放的公共公园和现在的公园。通过选择和报告主要特征来总结信息，并在相关的地方进行比较。

The plans illustrate the Grange

park’s

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layout in 1920 and today. In general, some big changes were made during the period. In 1920, there were two entrances near both Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street, it

remain

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the same

along with

an additional

entrance

from the underground car

park

. When walking into the

park

from the Eldon

street

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entrance

in 1920, people would see a fountain in the middle of the

park

, but now, the fountain was replaced by a

rose

garden

surrounded by seats on four sides which were once placed around the

park

.

In addition

, on the right side, the glasshouse alongside the wall in 1920 had

also

been removed, and a water feature

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up its place. And on the left side, the

rose

garden

has been completely removed.

Moreover

, on the left of the fountain, there used to be a stage for musicians, but now a new

amphitheater

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replaced it for concerts.

Furthermore

, on the left of the Arnold Avenue

entrance

in 1920, a

rose

garden

and a pond for water plants were situated. Today, a café and a children’s playground take up their place respectively. To

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, unlike other places, the

rose

garden

on the right of the

entrance

still remains the same.