The graph gives information about male and female gym memberships between 1980 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about male and female gym memberships between 1980 and 2010.  Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the number of males and females who purchased gym memberships between 1980 and 2010.
Overall
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, we observe that, since 1980, the registrations done by men were greater than other genders, except from 1990 to 1999.
Moreover
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, guy’s going to the gym increased drastically, after 1995.
As a result
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, in 2005 it was the highest and a record was set by men.
However
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, for women,
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event took place, in 1995. After 2005, there was a drastic fall in these numbers for both genders. On closer examination, it can be witnessed that, approximately 4000 males and 2000 females were to an exercise centre,
this
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was in 1985. After which, there was a downfall observed in the case of guys, until 1995, when less than 2000 of gents had registered for
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places, later there was an upward trend.
Conversely
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, opposite trends were seen for ladies, in 1995,
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number surged and reached close to 3000.
In addition
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to
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, in 2005, exactly 8000 individuals were going to a fitness club, out of which 5000 were men. Interestingly,
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this
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period there was a very intense drop in the figures, which resulted in less than 3000 people purchasing these memberships.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrollment
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • decline
  • steady increase
  • pronounced difference
  • converge
  • diverge
  • membership rate
  • significant growth
  • slump
  • dominant trend
  • predominantly
  • consistent pattern
  • noteworthy
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