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The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the number of
people
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 migrating to cities in three countries (
Iran
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, Indonesia, and
Russia
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) over a period of 25 years.
Overall
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it is clear that
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 the number of immigrants increased in all three countries over the years. The
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 for
Russia
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 remained the highest. By 2025, the migration in Indonesia is expected to surpass the numbers in
Russia
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. In 2000, a strong majority of Russians moved to urban settlements, numbering up to 15
million
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,
while
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 the
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 for
Iran
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 remained lower, at roughly 5
million
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. Between the years, 2005 and 2020, the numbers for both increased,and especially for
Iran
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 because it saw an exponential rise from 5
million
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people
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 to almost 80
million
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people
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. A similar trend was followed in
Russia
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, but in 2025, it is expected that the migrants in
Iran
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 surpass the numbers in
Russia
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, and the
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 is predicted to rise up to 90
million
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people
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.
On the other hand
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, a gradual increase in the migration of
people
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 to cities was noticed. From 2000 to 2020, the
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 slightly increased from 10
million
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 to roughly 20
million
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, and in 2025, it is expected to remain unchanged.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, iran, russia, figure, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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