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The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the number of
people
 migrating to cities in three countries (
Iran
, Indonesia, and
Russia
) over a period of 25 years.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 the number of immigrants increased in all three countries over the years. The
figure
 for
Russia
 remained the highest. By 2025, the migration in Indonesia is expected to surpass the numbers in
Russia
. In 2000, a strong majority of Russians moved to urban settlements, numbering up to 15
million
,
while
 the
figure
 for
Iran
 remained lower, at roughly 5
million
. Between the years, 2005 and 2020, the numbers for both increased,and especially for
Iran
 because it saw an exponential rise from 5
million
people
 to almost 80
million
people
. A similar trend was followed in
Russia
, but in 2025, it is expected that the migrants in
Iran
would
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 surpass the numbers in
Russia
, and the
figure
 is predicted to rise up to 90
million
people
.
On the other hand
, a gradual increase in the migration of
people
 to cities was noticed. From 2000 to 2020, the
figure
 slightly increased from 10
million
 to roughly 20
million
, and in 2025, it is expected to remain unchanged.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, iran, russia, figure, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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