The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line graph illustrates average carbon dioxide
emissions
per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal, which were emitted during 40 years from 1967 to 2007. Units are measured in metric Use synonyms
tonnes
.
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Overall
, average Linking Words
emissions
of carbon dioxide in the UK and Sweden went down gradually, Use synonyms
while
for Italy and Portugal, they increased significantly. Linking Words
Furthermore
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the UK had the highest Linking Words
emissions
throughout.
Regarding carbon dioxide indicators in the UK, it had Use synonyms
emissions
at around 11 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
toward the beginning Use synonyms
it
and Correct pronoun usage
apply
then
decreased gradually to about 9 metric Linking Words
tonnes
in 2007. Use synonyms
Likewise
, Linking Words
emissions
in Sweden, the Use synonyms
emissions
were approximately 8 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
in the first year and Use synonyms
then
peaked at 10 metric Linking Words
tonnes
in 1977 before falling dramatically to a low of 6 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
in the Use synonyms
last
year.
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On the other hand
, Italy’s Linking Words
emissions
were at about 4 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
in the beginning, Use synonyms
however
by the end of the period it rose to 8 metric Linking Words
tonnes
. Use synonyms
Similarly
, in Portugal, its CO2 Linking Words
emissions
increased from less than 2 metric Use synonyms
ton
to around 5 metric Fix the agreement mistake
tons
tonnes
Use synonyms
at the end
of the period.Linking Words
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