The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart below demonstrates the percentage of city residents' caffeine and tea purchasing and three different consuming habits in the past 4 weeks in different

cities

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in Australia.

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chart shows the difference between 5

cities

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such

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as Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart. Significantly, the most popular type of these centres is 'Espresso or Tea from the cafe',

on the other hand

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, the lowest one is ' Buying fresh coffee'.

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the highest bar in types in

cities

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is at around 60 and 65 per cent, which is the leading type. If we look at the trends over that period,we can see that the 'Went to a cafe' is almost doubled as 'Bought fresh beans' and the ratio of percentages of the

cities

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is slightly similar to each other.

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, describing a chart, the y-axis below shows the percentage of city residents and the x-axis through names of places.

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, we can see the differences between the three methods of different city residents' drinking.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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5 paragraphs

166 words

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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Compared to past, more people are now trying to learn a foreign language to increase their chances of landing a better job in their native country or to have better opportunities to work abroad. To what extent do you agree with this point of view?

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some people say that music can bring people of different cultures and ages together. to what extend do you agree or disagree?