The map below shows a civic centre between the present and its plan. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The map below shows a civic centre between the present and its plan. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The map provides information concerning the existing and the development plan for the city centre. At first glance, it can
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seen that the current layout illustrates numerous parks,
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the proposed future one represents extra facilities with underground parking. Starting with the current setup, North Avenue holds 2 parking areas with a movie theatre in between.
In contrast
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, most of the functional buildings
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as the exhibition, council offices, town hall, shopping centre, and
library
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are located along Victoria Avenue from High Street to Smith Street respectively. Moving on to the proposal arrangement, there are additional facilities constructions like a cafe and hotel & restaurant ,since the car parks are replaced by the modern parking systems under the
library
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and town hall.
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, there are size adjustments in the
library
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and exhibition, the former shows larger in the new location with the basement garage appearing more convenient.
Whereas
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, the latter depicts a smaller positioning in the old
library
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position next to Smith Street.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Civic centre
  • Present
  • Plan
  • Comparison
  • Main features
  • Map
  • Summarize
  • Information
  • Report
  • Relevant
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