The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides information about different modes of transport used to travel to work in one city in three different years.
overall
, it can be clearly observed that the proportion using the car
was the highest in the 2000 year. while
,
the bike was the lowest.
to Remove the comma
apply
being
with the 2000 year the percentage using buses was approximately 15%.Verb problem
begin
While
the car
it was increased dramatically by about 40% then
plunged by around 5%.
in1980
ratio Change preposition
In in1980
to
buses,Change preposition
of
car
,Fix the agreement mistake
cars
bike
,and for starting nearly 30%,25%,20%,Fix the agreement mistake
bikes
15
%, respectively.Transport modes in Europen city in 1960 the rates to foot was the highest almost 35% Correct word choice
and 15
however
, the car
was decreased to 5%.Submitted by azoz4001 on
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