The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from the sugar canes .

The diagram demonstrates the procedure for producing

sugar

from

sugar

canes

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.

Overall

, the process consists of seven stages, beginning with growing the

sugar

canes

and ending up with drying and cooling the

sugar

crystals. In the first

stage

, the

sugar

canes

are grown in a field for 12-18 months . After that ,the

sugar

canes

are harvested

by

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two modes.

Firstly

, farmers

harvested

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them manually .

Secondly

, some people used harvesting machines to harvest the ripened

sugar

canes

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.In the next

stage

,the

sugar

canes

are

putted

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in a crushing device to get juice . In the fourth

stage

, juice is passed through a limestone filter for purification.

Furthermore

, purified juice is heated in an evaporator

as a result

it becomes a syrup . In the sixth

stage

,syrup containing

sugar

crystals is passed through a centrifugal machine which separates the

sugar

crystals from

a

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syrup.

Finally

,

sugar

is dried and cooled in a drum for market use .