The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

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per capita in four different European countries over a

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of 40 years, from 1967 to 2007.

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in the

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and Sweden decreased for most of the

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shown.

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,

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Italy's and Portugal's CO2

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per resident rose steadily,

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had the highest amount of

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. For the first decades, the

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dioxide output stood at almost 11 metric tonnes.

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, over the following three decades, there was a slight fall and the

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had reached 9 by 2007.

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, the CO2

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in Sweden rose sharply for the first decades, which

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by a sudden decline with the rate reaching a low of 5, 5 in 2007.

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, both Italy and Portugal saw similar moderate roses over the

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with 4 metric tonnes the

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per head in Sweden grew over 6 m.t in 1977 , and

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number gradually increased over the

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to finish at approximately 8 metric tonnes in 2007. The

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for Portugal was the lowest of the four countries. In the year 1967, the

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started at 1 m.t, after which it rose dramatically by 2007 and

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reached 5. 5 m.t, matching Sweden’s average.