The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line graph gives information
of
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on
Carbon
Dioxide emissions
per capita in four different European countries over a period
of 40 years, from 1967 to 2007.
It is clear that
carbon
emissions
in the Uk
and Sweden decreased for most of the Correct your spelling
UK
period
shown. However
, while
Italy's and Portugal's CO2 emissions
per resident rose steadily, UK
had the highest amount of Correct article usage
the UK
carbon
dioxide releases
.
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figure
for UK's
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the UK's
Carbon
dioxide output stood at almost 11 metric tonnes. However
, over the following three decades, there was a slight fall and the figure
had reached 9 by 2007. In contrast
, the CO2 emissions
in Sweden rose sharply for the first decades, which followed
by a sudden decline with the rate reaching a low of 5, 5 in 2007.
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was followed
Conversely
, both Italy and Portugal saw similar moderate roses over the period
. at the start of the period
with 4 metric tonnes the carbon
emissions
per head in Sweden grew over 6 m.t in 1977 , and this
number gradually increased over the period
to finish at approximately 8 metric tonnes in 2007. The figure
for Portugal was the lowest of the four countries. In the year 1967, the figure
started at 1 m.t, after which it rose dramatically by 2007 and had
reached 5. 5 m.t, matching Sweden’s average.Unnecessary verb
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