Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

When it comes to whether the main environmental problem of our

time

Use synonyms

is the loss of particular

species

Use synonyms

of

plants

Use synonyms

and

animals

Use synonyms

, some people agree with the opinion,

whereas

Linking Words

others think that there are more important environmental

problems

Use synonyms

. In recent years, more and more particular

species

Use synonyms

of

plants

Use synonyms

and

animals

Use synonyms

are dying out. The problem comes

to

Change preposition

from

show examples

our views. It's correct to spend our

time

Use synonyms

to

Change preposition

apply

show examples

solving the environmental problem. If the particular

species

Use synonyms

of

plants

Use synonyms

and

animals

Use synonyms

are lost, it will be a pity for all of the world. What's more, the ecosystem will

be

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

also

Linking Words

be destroyed by the members of the cycle disappearing. Every plant and animal has a significant role in the ecosystem whether they are good for the world.

However

Linking Words

, there are other more important environmental

problems

Use synonyms

which are happening at the same

time

Use synonyms

,

such

Linking Words

as

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

air pollution, the rubbish of the sea, scarcity of water and so on. If we spend lots of

time

Use synonyms

on the loss of particular

species

Use synonyms

of

plants

Use synonyms

and

animals

Use synonyms

, these

problems

Use synonyms

will be solved slowly. It's important that water and air are closely related to our daily lives, we can't subsist without them. It's crucial to solve these

problems

Use synonyms

as soon as possible. In my opinion, both of them seem to have a point.

However

Linking Words

,

howerver

Correct your spelling

however

I agree with the first point more. One of the reasons is that all of the

plants

Use synonyms

and

animals

Use synonyms

need to be treated well. There would be no ecosystem without them. The other is every life is precious, it's a citizen's duty to protect them,

spending

Correct word choice

and spending

show examples

time

Use synonyms

on them is meaningful.

The

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

Other environmental

problems

Use synonyms

are

also

Linking Words

important, but we

also

Linking Words

need to do something

for

Change preposition

about

show examples

the loss of particular

species

Use synonyms

of

plants

Use synonyms

and

animals

Use synonyms

.