Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The environmental problem is becoming more and more important nowadays,many factories
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to
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attention to. That very true that the
extincts
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extinction
of many plants and
animals
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destroyed the
environment
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.It is a chain of every species,not only the loss of
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species ,whatever any species
extincted
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extinct
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may
changed
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the
environment
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,the biological chain would
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just by slight changes. There are actually other problems that
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environment
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the environment
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worse,but it
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because of
human
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.With the
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of
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technology,our
environment
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is becoming worse and worse,especially
at
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18th
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and 19th.Humans
destroys
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the
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forest
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forests
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to
built
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factory
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factories
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,discharge
the
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dirty water with chemical elements
to
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the ocean,emission
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carbon dioxide into the air... The main reason that makes the loss of plants and
animals
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is because
of
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many people
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them for meals,and the
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environment
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environmental
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pollution.So that
the
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same problem.To protect the
environment
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,the only
methods
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is
humans
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for humans
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rise
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the
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awerness
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awareness
of environmental protection and to do it ,we have already
loss
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lost
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much. To prevent plants and
animals
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from extinction,we could search for their genes and grow them in
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way.To
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the trend of rising temperature,we could prompt ourselves to go out by bike or public transportation,in order to lower the emission of carbon dioxide and the
behavior
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of eating protected
animals
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must be forbidden,the destroyed water should not discharge into
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anymore. I
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that we could make the
environment
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better if
every one
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do themselves a fever.The
environmental
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environment
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will
be solve
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one day.

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structure
Make sure you present a clear introduction that states your opinion clearly. Additionally, having a strong conclusion helps reinforce your main points.
coherence
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content
Provide specific examples that are more relevant to support your points, this can enhance your argument.
content
You have shown understanding of environmental problems which is a good start.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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