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The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
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The information regarding regional household recycling
rates
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 is depicted by
line
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 graph. the data represent three different countries with two years 2005 and 2015.
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, the vast majority of the household recycling
rates
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 in three countries witnessed growth in the given decade,
while
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 the household recycling rate in France dropped. It is evident from
data
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 that, the percentage of recycling
rates
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 was 50% against 35 in
UK
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 and France meanwhile Germany had
maximum
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 number of 20% .the recycling
rates
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 in France declined significantly over the period of time which stopped falling down in 2013
.
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after
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this
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 year, it
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 by 10%. Moving
further
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a
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 stability in
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the percentage
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 of
UK
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the UK
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 has been seen from 2007 to 2009. At the start of
year
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the year
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 2009, the
rates
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 had
been
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certainly
grew
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growing
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 up which ended at 60%
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 was
maximum
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 recycling
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rates
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 of all time. When it comes to Germany it follows the pattern of
UK
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the UK
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 most of
time
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 it went through
lowest
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 rate in 2005 with 20%. It went up by approximately 35% till 2011 and reached
at
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55%of
rates
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 in 2015,
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which seems
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 to be
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the second
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 highest
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rates
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in
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this
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 year.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rates with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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