The bar graph shows the number of people visited on university website and searched two sites in last 15 hours. Summarize the chart and comapre if require.

The bar graph shows the number of people visited on university website and searched two sites in last 15 hours.

Summarize the chart and comapre if require.
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The bar chart illustrates the
computer
Correct quantifier usage
number of computer
show examples
operators, who visited two websites in the
last
15 days in thousands explained by a professor from a university.
Overall
, it can be seen from the line graph, that many students show more interest in surfing
music
choices as compared to the pop parade.
Music
choice by the people was high,
whereas
music
parade was searched less in same hours. It is conspicuous that the pop parade was searched by nearly 120,000 in the first
hour
,
further
, it decreased in 3rd.
hour
reached 190,000 and it declined sharply to hit 62,000 in five hours,
additionally
, it swung an abrupt increment of 150,000 in 11th.
hour
and again it plummeted and attaining to 82,000 in 12th.
hour
and fell in 13th.
hour
, again dramatically rose to 162,000 in the 14th.
hour
and
finally
touched 170,000 in the final
hour
.
In contrast
, people searched
music
choice in the first
hour
at 40,000 with fluctuations and it touches at 20,000 in 4th.
hour
and it was oscillator and touched 22,000 in 11th.
hour
and suddenly it jumped to 120,000 in 12th.
hour
and it displays some movements and hit 68,000 on the 15th.
hour
.
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