The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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location of Britain in 2017 and 2018, The table illustrates the source of funding for the police like the national government, local taxes, and others in
pounds
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the pie chart shows the spending percentage on each of salaries, technology,
building
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buildings
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, and transport.
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, in 2018 money income was more than the previous year the main source was
national
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the national
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government, and most of the spending was on salaries. The income main spreader was the national government with 175.5,177.8
million
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pounds
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in 2017,2018 respectively, preceded by local taxes with 91.2
million
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pounds
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and 102.3
million
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pounds
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the latter year, some money came from other sources like grants giving 38
million
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pounds
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and 38.5
million
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pounds
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in row. In terms of money spending, we have salaries taking roughly more than2/3 the pie chart with 75% in 2017 and 69% in 2018, next we have the second predominant part which is building and transport with 17% in both years,
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, technology taking the least amount with 8%and 14% respectively.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words pounds, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fiscal allocations
  • Revenue streams
  • Budgetary oversight
  • Expenditure
  • Financial appropriation
  • Government grants
  • Local taxation
  • Operational costs
  • Capital investment
  • Public safety
  • Crime prevention
  • Community policing
  • Resource allocation
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Budgetary constraints
  • Fiscal year
  • Fund disbursement
  • Budget deficit/surplus
  • Trend analysis
  • Financial sustainability
  • Law enforcement funding
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