The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The table and pie chart show the financial terms for police in a specific location in Britain in 2017 and 2018, The table illustrates the source of funding for the police (the national government, local taxes, and others )in
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the pie chart shows the spending percentage on each of (salaries, technology, building, and transport).
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, in 2018 money income was more than the previous year the main source was the national government, and most of the spending was on salaries.
The income main spreader was the national government with 175.5,177.8 Linking Words
million
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pounds
in 2017,2018 respectively, preceded by local taxes with 91.2 Use synonyms
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and 102.3 Use synonyms
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the latter year, some money came from other sources like grants giving 38 Use synonyms
million
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and 38.5 Use synonyms
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in row.
In terms of money spending, we have salaries taking roughly more than2/3 the pie chart with 75% in 2017 and 69% in 2018, next we have the second predominant part which is building and transport with 17% in both years, Use synonyms
finally
, technology taking the least amount with 8%and 14% respectively.Linking Words
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