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The graph below shows our methods of dealing with waste in four countries. Summary the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows our methods of dealing with waste in four countries. Summary the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The
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apply
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bar chart depicts the percentage of four different types to deal with waste in five different countries.
Overall
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,the first point to note is that the
landfill
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 method is more popular in other countries
exept
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except
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 .
In addition
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,the proportion of recycled in
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the netherlands
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netherlands
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Netherlands
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 and
landfill
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 in the
uk
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UK
 is the highest.
To begin
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 with , the proportion of burnt and used as chemicals and
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landfill
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landfills
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 in
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the netherlands
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netherlands
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Netherlands
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 way more lower
within
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by
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 8 to 14% than recycled
one
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wich
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which
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 is nearly 70%.
Furthermore
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,the rate of
used
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use
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as
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of
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 chemicals and
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landfill
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landfills
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 is
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quite
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quiet
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quite
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 the same in both Italy and Spain with 15%
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of landfill
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landfill
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landfills
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also
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 used as chemicals with 40% .
To sum up
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,
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the Uk
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Uk
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UK
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 has
significant
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a significant
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 rate
in
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of
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landfill
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 close to 70%
as well
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as
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and
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 it has the lowest rate uses burnt
method
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methods
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comparing
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compared
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 to other countries.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words landfill with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • waste management
  • recycling
  • incineration
  • landfill
  • composting
  • methods of dealing with waste
  • percentage
  • comparison
  • significantly higher/lower
  • trend
  • observed
  • data
  • depicted
  • significant similarities and differences
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