The table below gives details of world electricity production by renewable sources in the four years between 2009 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The table provides information about the global electricity
generation
by various renewable source
from 2009 to 2012.
Fix the agreement mistake
sources
Overall
, production of the electric power
by hydraulics was at peak position,while
solar energy
contributed a fraction of power
. Furthermore
, all the sources experienced an upward trend.
To begin
with, generation
of the electricity by hydraulics was higher that
bio-mass and wind Correct word choice
than
energy
. It continued to increase over the period .It was 3329TWh in 2009, rose
to 3514.3TWh in 2010 .
In 2011 and 2012, Correct word choice
and rose
power
generation
by hydraulics was 3530.8TWh and 3663.4 respectively. While
,
Remove the comma
apply
power
generation
by wind and bio-mass in 2012 was 534 and 326.2TWh.
Conversely
, geothermal and solar energy
produced a
least amount of Change the article
the
the
electricity. Production by geothermal Correct article usage
apply
energy
increased slightly over the period , whereas
construction of the power
by solar efficiency was 21TWh in 2009 and rose dramatically go
104.5 Correct your spelling
to
TWh
in 2012Submitted by mianraza686 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words generation, power, energy, twh with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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