The graph below gives information about international tourist arrival in different parts of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about international tourist arrival in different parts of the world.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the
number
of international tourists arriving in 5 different parts of the world, from 1990 to 2005.
Overall
, we observe that until 2005, the
number
of people coming to Africa and South America was nearly the same.
Moreover
, these figures for the Central and the Eastern part of Europe have grown rapidly, since 1990.
However
, from the beginning North America has been witnessing the highest
number
of tourists.
In addition
to
this
, Southeast Asia's
number
has been growing at a constant rate. On closer examination, we find that, in 1990, approximately 10 million international individuals had been to Sub-Saharan Africa and to
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South America,
this
tallie rose to 15 million by the end of 2000.
Apart from
this
, more than 30,000,000 people from worldwide had come to
the
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Europe, in 1990,
this
doubled in the next 5 years, and by the end of
2005
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this
was close to 900 thousand. Interestingly,
North
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U.S.A. was the most preferred location for
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travelling
purpose
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,
as a result
, in 2005, 700 thousand people visited
this
place, and
this
figure grew until 2000, reaching the final value of 90 million. In the case, of South East-Asia
this
was close to 30,000,000, in 1995, and 50,000,000, in 2005.
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