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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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The diagrams illustrate how an airport site is planned to be developed next year.
It is clear that
 there will be extensive developments with regard to the construction of facilities on
this
 site.
According to
 the current map, there are 8 gates which are connected to the main hall via walkway corridors. the airport has two gates which are allocated for arrival exitance and departure entrances. passengers reach to security and passport control which are located across from the customs, through the departure gate. The cafe
also
 is constructed in the vicinity of check-in There are plans to increase the number of gates to 18.
Also
, the walkway will be replaced with a sky train. the ATM will be added at the bottom of the cafe'. the car hire is going to be built adjacent to an arrivals gate. the cafe will be removed and replaced in the southwest of the floor plan. The bag drop is going to be located along the security. ln future plan shops will be constructed at the top of the passport control.
while
 all these alterations will happen in future plans, the passport control, customs, and security will be unchanged.
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introduction conclusion present
Provide a concise conclusion that summarizes the key points of the redevelopment plans.
clear comprehensive ideas
Proofread your work to correct minor grammatical errors and capitalization issues, such as capitalizing 'The' at the beginning of sentences.
relevant specific examples
Good use of specific details from the diagrams, such as mentioning the number of gates and exact locations of new facilities.
logical structure
Strong logical structure, with clear comparisons between the current layout and the future plans.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • terminal
  • car park
  • runways
  • redevelopment
  • proposed changes
  • expanded terminals
  • new gates
  • additional parking
  • amenities
  • navigation
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
  • job creation
  • traffic congestion
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