You were absent from an important event held by the company you work for. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Apologize for your absence and explain the reasoning. Explain why you had to be at the other event. Explain what you will do to catch up.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my sincere apology for being not present at the organization's event. The reason for my unavailability is the client meeting which was held parallelly on
same
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day.
Also
, I didn't have any chance to miss
this
conference because I had the responsibility of project owner.
Therefore
, there is no way for
this
conversation
going
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on without the owner of the project. The cause of not attending
this
office event is my role and responsibility in the new project. Being a product owner is not only playing as an opener but
also
showing winning confidence to other stakeholders.
Moreover
, If I were supposed to skip
this
meeting, it would lower my team's morale which would have a negative impact on our client.
As a result
, it was mandatory for me to be available for my group success. In order to catch up on
this
skipped event I will get in touch with the group members and get to know about the main insights of
this
activity.
Along with
that, I will go through the recorded session so that we all will be on the same page. Thank you so much for your understanding. Yours Faithfully, Navdeep Kaur
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Try to vary your sentence structures to make your writing more engaging.
task achievement
Ensure consistency in using the name or title of the person you are addressing throughout the letter.
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The tone of the letter is appropriate and respectful, which suits the context well.
coherence cohesion
The letter is logically structured, with each paragraph serving a clear purpose.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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