The chart bleow shows wastes collection by a recycling centre from 2011 and 2015

The chart bleow shows wastes collection by a recycling centre from 2011 and 2015
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart bleow shows wastes collection by a recycling centre from 2011 and 2015
The bar chart compares the four different wastes collected by a recycling plant between 2011 and 2015, a
period
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of five years.
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, it is noticeable that paper waste was generally the highest over the whole
period
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shown except in the
year
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2013.
On the other hand
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, garden waste was the least recycled throughout the
period
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shown. In the
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year
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of
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2011 and 2012, all 4 different categories had a similar trend which decreased
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the amount of collected numbers by recycling factories. Paper collected 57 tons to 50 which was the highest collected.
This
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is followed by the glass collection, which decreased
48
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from 48
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tons to 41 tons between 2011 and 2012.
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, garden waste collection
also
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had a decreasing trend from 35 to 27, and
last
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but not least, the gathering of garden
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significantly dropped by half from 2011 to 2012. From the
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2013 to the
last
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year
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in 2015, the amount of paper collection increased significantly and it was picked at the
last
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year
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as 70 tonnes.
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,
it is clear that
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compared to 2014, the data of all categories had an increasing trend by the
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of
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2015.
In addition
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to that, the category of glass fluctuated and did not show significant changes over the whole
period
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shown.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words period, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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