The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided bar graph illustrates the rise of
urban
population in 4 different parts of the world it Add an article
the urban
also
gives a look into the future .
Overall
, the urban community seems to have been at a low rate during the 1950 especially
in 2 continents . Add the comma(s)
, especially
On the other hand
, by 2000 there seems to be a dramatic increase in those populations mostly in Latin america
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America
although
in Asia and Africa as their
both a bit over 30% .
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they are
Moreover
, the highest number of the
urban Correct article usage
apply
community
is 40% for the year 1950 in Latin America to be specific . As for the Fix the agreement mistake
communities
2000's
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2000s
where
the population grew it surpassed 40% for the whole world . Correct word choice
when
In addition
, by 2030 it is predicted that their
surely be a spur in the percentage of the urban population Correct your spelling
there
for
Africa , Asia , Change preposition
in
Latin
America with the whole world Correct word choice
and Latin
while
reaching its highest perdicted
to be 80% and its lowest 50% so we will face a sure rise of those Correct your spelling
predicted
coummunties
.Correct your spelling
communities
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