The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.
This
bar chart indicates the sales
numbers of cell phones based on the five different brands globally from the years of 2009, 2011 and 2013.
Overall
, Nokia took
the highest number of Verb problem
had
sales
, whereas
ZTE sold the lowest number of units over the period shown. Also
, it is clear while
there were increasing patterns in Samsung and Apple, there were decreasing trends in Nokia and LG. ZTE showed slow sales
movement over the whole period.
It is noticeable that the mobile phone sales
of Samsung remarkably increased from 250 million
in 2009 and it reached the highest point at 250 million
in 2013. There was a similar increasing pattern in Apple although
the total number was much lower compared to Samsung. Apple started from 20 million
and it soared sharply to over 150 million
in the year of 2013.
By contrast
, aNokia
was the world’s top provider in the years 2009 and 2011, their Correct your spelling
a Nokia
Nokia
sales
plummeted significantly to 250 million
in 2013. Furthermore
, LG also
declined slowly from 120 million
to 70 million
in 2013. Although
ZTE had the least sales
, it slightly went up over the period, but this
was a minor change.Submitted by hmhy0326 on
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